little-b (buzzylittleb) wrote,
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beta request

I've been writing torakowalski a birthday story.

It's seriously fucked up. It's a Hard Core Logo story with a touch of Doctor Who (very tiny spoiler from last night's Utopia). I don't even know if the thing works.

Would somebody be willing to look over the thing for me? It's currently 1,500 words or so and the ending is sucking. I so should have actually plotted rather than just followed the idea.
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