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CYOA - probably isn't a CYOA but should be case!fic crossed by agatha christ [if i ever manage it]

CYOA - probably isn't a CYOA but should be case!fic crossed by agatha christ [if i ever manage it]

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dief and donuts COYA
I ran out of title space. But it is hard to desrcibe and I'm not sure if I can make it beyond chapter two

still writering here

welsh is recollecting some old memories, fraser is feeling uncomfortable and ray faces resignation



CHAPTER ONE:

in which welsh expouses bird watching, fraser is feeling uncomfortable, and ray is reallocated

CHAPTER TWO:

in which ray contemplates


reads a terrible book, fraser has a cell, and fraser speaks in toumgs


ETA: ray reads a book and has a relevation and fraser speaks in tongues
  • Well, all kinds of thinky thoughts there....
    • also, punctuating dialogue is difficult

      welsh likes long sentences -- he is nostalgic for giant bird cages
  • I lost he uncomfortable bit -- it didn't fit with the shape of the dialogue.



    a lot of the information I thought I was giving to welsh has been pulled back to another chapter

    welsh doesn't have reams of information if he's only had a fax ten minutes ago

    frannie kicks administrive ass
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